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Time is Ruin
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Yesterday it rained.
Yesterday I sank in my seat,
Sank in defeat.
Let the whiskey wash it away.
Just wash it all away.
Time is evil,
As all human creations are.
A deadline comes and fear grips my star.
Thick is the air, and I am well aware.
So very aware.
The end, death himself is right there.
Softly taken sips sweep down my throat.
Cold and cutting, a real whiskey kiss.
And death is there, running hands through my hair.
I am so aware,
But the end, it doesn't care.
Today it rained again,
It poured.
Laid siege on the wood boards.
But I still sat there in my seat.
I watched,
And time would work its evil crime.
Tomorrow it will come to be.
A van, with dogs to herd sheep like me.
A warhorse is still a horse,
Shot when weak.
Yes, time is evil.
It wrecks you, it is ruin,
Like an aging tree, as it leans before the fall.
I am like that, but not so tall.
Not at all.
Yesterday I sank in my seat,
Sank in defeat.
Let the whiskey wash it away.
Just wash it all away.
Time is evil,
As all human creations are.
A deadline comes and fear grips my star.
Thick is the air, and I am well aware.
So very aware.
The end, death himself is right there.
Softly taken sips sweep down my throat.
Cold and cutting, a real whiskey kiss.
And death is there, running hands through my hair.
I am so aware,
But the end, it doesn't care.
Today it rained again,
It poured.
Laid siege on the wood boards.
But I still sat there in my seat.
I watched,
And time would work its evil crime.
Tomorrow it will come to be.
A van, with dogs to herd sheep like me.
A warhorse is still a horse,
Shot when weak.
Yes, time is evil.
It wrecks you, it is ruin,
Like an aging tree, as it leans before the fall.
I am like that, but not so tall.
Not at all.
I wrote this in order to submit it to the 'Identity' themed literature competition on the DA group 'LooseLacesPoetry'. I don't normally write poetry with a purpose to submit it anywhere so if there is anything I have done incorrectly, I am sorry.
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I thought about the word 'identity' and the theme I took on was that of a long, fulfilled individual confronting his end in a retired peoples home.
I have attempted to capture those emotions. I think I did okay.
Thanks for reading, hope you enjoy
Edit: Had to make a brief edit to change a word I incidentally omitted.
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I thought about the word 'identity' and the theme I took on was that of a long, fulfilled individual confronting his end in a retired peoples home.
I have attempted to capture those emotions. I think I did okay.
Thanks for reading, hope you enjoy
Edit: Had to make a brief edit to change a word I incidentally omitted.
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You captured the emotion perfectly!